butterfly eyes
and sweetly flies
tracing the lines of her tears to touch the skies
following quickly into the shadows of she
so lined in the gravity of her sighs
and the starkly whispered cries
of memories, the false histories, twisted reveries
sunken far into the wilting frame,
pinned up into the masonry of ruptured ties,
raptured lies
steeped hotly into the funeral of they
splitting evenly the sickening disguise
of their deceptive compromise…
and softly goodbye


About Abhishek Indoria

Hello! My name is Abhishek Indoria, I am 18, I love technology and gaming, especially Final Fantasy and Persona series and I love to get into philosophical, political and interesting debates. Hit me up on twitter if you're interested in talking : or on facebook :

Posted on July 1, 2011, in Poems and tagged , , , , , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 8 Comments.

  1. elegant imagery. a job well done.

    Invite you to join poets rally today,
    Visit me and add your entry via linkz, have fun making new poetic friends.
    Bless you.
    Enjoy a graceful weekend.

  2. amazing, glad to see you in.
    Happy Rally.

  3. She – then They – then back to She. heartfelt picture.

  4. Wow. Your poem, “She” is powerfully brimming with emotion and images invoking the senses.

  5. A well written poem – lovely x

  6. Beautiful emotional poem =)

  7. well constructed piece.

    deep and powerful.

    invite you to take our week 5 writing challenge,
    anything comes to mind would be awesome to share,
    hope to see your in.
    Happy Saturday.

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